Summer vacation.
It's one of the greatest things on planet earth. The sun is warm and happy, the grass is green, the flowers bloom (when I remember to water them), and routine goes completely out the window. No homework, no minimum reading requirements, no bedtimes, or wake-up times. Take all day doing your chores, or get them done fast and play the rest of the day. Whatever works. . . .
At least that's how it is at our house.
I love summer!!
But with the lack of routine its hard for me to make sure I am setting aside time to write. So . . . yeah, haven't done much of that this summer.
But it doesn't mean I haven't been thinking about writing. In fact I think of it constantly. Ideas flow like mad and I even designed a writers/art studio that we've been working on. It even has sheet-rock and if not for a gallbladder attack and subsequent surgery, it would be mud and taped by now.
So since I am now forced to enjoy the end of my summer vacation from the couch, I figured as long as I can stay awake long enough, now would be a good time to catch up on my blog. If the writing is a little confusing, blame the pain meds:).
Before my little attack we had just returned from a family vacation to the beautiful state of Wyoming. We enjoyed the Teton and Yellowstone national parks, Jackson Hole and even spent a few nights in the gorgeous, fun, little town of West Yellowstone, Montana. I have to say, if my husband could find a job up there and the summers were just a little longer, I would so want to live there. It's the perfect place for all sorts of inspiration. I only hope some of the pictures can become paintings eventually--but the light is never the same on photo paper.
The vacation did a lot for our family. We were crammed in our little car for hours on end and yet the fighting stayed at a minimum. My boys were in awe of everything and it was just too beautiful to be grumpy. The pace was slow, and we went to every hotpot or scenic spot we felt like, no time constraints to make, or specific places we just had to see. We looked at the map, loaded our backpacks, and went wherever we felt like hiking to. We even saw a mama bear and her baby just off one of the trails we took. It was so amazing!
I didn't worry about my book or its status with the agent, or how much I had to do when I got home. So when we did get home, I felt refreshed and ready to face whatever came up (even though I wasn't expecting one of those things to be surgery).
When we got home we were watching (yes, this is another movie moment) Rudy--one of the best movies of all time because of the story. I actually had the opportunity to hear him speak at a writers conference once. What an amazing man. During the movie I felt such empathy for Rudy as he opened letter after letter rejecting him from attending Notre Dame, his life-long dream.
Writers know what this feels like.
We spend hours upon hours creating something, it becomes a part of us, and then we send letters about it out into the world hoping someone will see its possibilities, want to read it, and hopefully help get it into the hands of others who will read it, love it, and give it a place on their bookshelf.
So when the rejections pile up, it becomes harder and harder not to give up.
Rudy didn't. Despite the odds against him. And he eventually fulfilled his dream.
Most of you who read my blog know I have written 26 queries, and received 25 rejections. One query finally made it past the slush pile and the awesome intern requested the novel, read it, told me she enjoyed it, and passed it along to the agent to read. I am still waiting to hear back from them, but from everything I've read about other author experiences, I'm just really grateful my creation actually made it this far. I really like the agency and I hope I will hear back from them soon, but this experience has taught me a lot. What if I had given up at query rejection number ten, or fifteen, or twenty-five? What if I had never sent that twenty-sixth query?
There is no guarantee the agent will decide to represent me at this point, but I'm not going to give up on my dream. Sometimes we have to step back and enjoy the scenery, slow down and focus on what really matters, and let what will happen, happen. I can't make someone love my book. I can write it and send it out, but the rest of the details have to work themselves out.
In the meantime, I'm going to enjoy the scenery and never, ever, stop dreaming.
For anyone who might be thinking of giving up on your dreams, you just might want to watch the YouTube video, Brandon Sanderson: Writing of Epic Proportions (I tried to copy the link but couldn't get it to work). My friend shared this with me and it was like he was taking the words out of my mouth--but he says it better than I ever could. Great man, great writer, great inspiration:).
Showing posts with label querying literary agents. Show all posts
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Monday, March 18, 2013
QUERY... The five letter expletive
I have written dozens of queries and only one has ever made it to the editor and resulted in publication. That said you're probably wondering why I'm qualified to give advice on how to write a query. I'm not. I've attended a lot of classes, asked advice of acquisitions editors and published authors, read websites and magazines, and I still haven't written that perfect query that has agents slavering for my work.
But the nightmare process has helped me come up with a simpler way to brainstorm the query. I've taken the compendium of advice I've found on the subject of queries and compiled it into sections and checklists to make the process easier for me. If it helps one of you out there suffering through the pain of the five letter expletive (q-u-e-r-y), then I'm happy:).
Whether you are an aspiring author, a published author, or just someone looking for a job, you understand the pain of the query letter. Writing a query is like writing a resume, and before you write a resume you do your homework, right?
Right.
You are not going to apply for a job without first researching the job requirements, including the specific things the prospective employer wants to see on your resume.
A query needs to be treated in the same way. You can write a standard format for a query with all the basic things most queries need, but be prepared to tweak it to exactly what each specific agent/editor wants to see. So, before you even begin, DO YOUR HOMEWORK, even the most perfectly written query won't get you anywhere if you've sent it to someone who only represents children's books and you're trying to sell them your 100,000 word Horror novel...
Most agents/editors do not want a query longer than a single page. So how do you cram all your awesomeness into one page?
You focus on what's most important.
*Hook!! This has got to be good! If you don't hook them in that first sentence, chances are they won't bother finishing the rest of the letter. They're busy people and they base a lot on that first sentence.
*1-2 paragraph description of your book(single space your letter but put a space before and after each paragraph)
*1 paragraph pitching yourself
*Final thank you
Let's go through each step:
THE HOOK
1. What are the most important points of my story?
2. Out of this list which is the MOST important point?
(This will be the point you will work with to create the perfect "Hook". Read book jacket blurbs in your genre for ideas how to summarize the most important point of the book into one catching sentence. It needs to be a sentence that has them eagerly reading on. You can have your "hook" stand as its own paragraph, but if possible try and blend it right into your descriptive paragraphs.)
DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPHS
A paragraph is generally 3-5 sentences long. Question's 3, 6, 8, 10 and/or 11, and 12, can be turned into a sentence or two that you can then combine to create your descriptive paragraph(s).
3. Who are my main characters?
4. Which character's POV do I use the most? (If you switch points of view. If you only have one character POV then your description should be in their POV.)
5. What are the main goals in my story?
6. Out of these goals which are the most important/exciting? (These will be the elements used in the description)
7. What stands in the way of my characters success?
8. Which of the above is their greatest challenge? (Include in paragraph)
9. What will happen if your protagonist fails? (Be emotionally specific)
10. Out of the above, which is the worst that could happen? (Use this as the end of your paragraph description)
OR
11. What elements in my story's climax are the most exciting? (Choose one of these or something from 10. to end your description, tying all the sentences you created using questions 3, 6, 8, 10/11, together.)
12. What is your Genre, book title, and word count? (example: Your final sentence can read....My 90,000 word YA Fantasy, BOOK TITLE, draws the reader into a world where... fill in however you want. End the paragraph(s) and move on.
INTRODUCING YOU
13(a). IF you have writing experience.
What are my greatest writing accomplishments, sales, publications, awards, etc.
13(b). If you have NO writing experience...yet.
What are some interesting points about me that make me sound qualified to write in the genre chosen? And/or... Who does my writing compare to and why? 14. What books have I read that they represent that may compare to my writing style?
15. What is my ...?
*Genre?
*Word Count?
*Book Title?
(Be careful with this paragraph and make sure to read your agents specific guidelines. Some agents don't want to hear anything other than your publishing credits and some get really annoyed when you compare yourself to other authors, especially if you are brazen enough to say you think you are the next Stephenie Meyer or J.K. Rowling. When in doubt skip this paragraph all together, and move onto the thank you paragraph.)
FINAL SENTENCE
16. THANK THEM FOR THEIR TIME! Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.
Follow with a "Sincerely", "Yours truly", or whatever floats your boat.
Now that you have your list, you can take all the elements from your breakdown and start writing. Remember to try and keep it down to a single page, and format it according to the guidelines of the agent/editor. There will usually be different formats for email and snail mail submissions.
If the agent/editor wants you to include chapter or synopsis with your query you can type at the bottom of your query...
(For snail mail) ENC: Synopsis and first three chapters as per your guidlines.
(For email) INC: Synopsis and first three chapters as per your guidelines.
Once you've typed your query don't jump the gun and send it right off. Wait a few days and go back and look it over with fresh eyes. Check for mistakes. Then loan it to your good pal who's great with grammar and have them look it over. Then if you can afford it, hire a freelance editor to look it over. Some aren't too bad in price and it just might be the difference between a sale or not. I'll have a link on my Aspiring Authors page to the freelance editor I use as soon as its available. She's fabulous and fair priced. I don't know where I'd be without her. My grammar is terrible! I also have a checklist for writing a synopsis--I really hate those. I'll try to get that one posted soon!
Good luck!!! May your next query bring you the success you desire!!
But the nightmare process has helped me come up with a simpler way to brainstorm the query. I've taken the compendium of advice I've found on the subject of queries and compiled it into sections and checklists to make the process easier for me. If it helps one of you out there suffering through the pain of the five letter expletive (q-u-e-r-y), then I'm happy:).
Whether you are an aspiring author, a published author, or just someone looking for a job, you understand the pain of the query letter. Writing a query is like writing a resume, and before you write a resume you do your homework, right?
Right.
You are not going to apply for a job without first researching the job requirements, including the specific things the prospective employer wants to see on your resume.
A query needs to be treated in the same way. You can write a standard format for a query with all the basic things most queries need, but be prepared to tweak it to exactly what each specific agent/editor wants to see. So, before you even begin, DO YOUR HOMEWORK, even the most perfectly written query won't get you anywhere if you've sent it to someone who only represents children's books and you're trying to sell them your 100,000 word Horror novel...
Most agents/editors do not want a query longer than a single page. So how do you cram all your awesomeness into one page?
You focus on what's most important.
*Hook!! This has got to be good! If you don't hook them in that first sentence, chances are they won't bother finishing the rest of the letter. They're busy people and they base a lot on that first sentence.
*1-2 paragraph description of your book(single space your letter but put a space before and after each paragraph)
*1 paragraph pitching yourself
*Final thank you
Let's go through each step:
THE HOOK
1. What are the most important points of my story?
2. Out of this list which is the MOST important point?
(This will be the point you will work with to create the perfect "Hook". Read book jacket blurbs in your genre for ideas how to summarize the most important point of the book into one catching sentence. It needs to be a sentence that has them eagerly reading on. You can have your "hook" stand as its own paragraph, but if possible try and blend it right into your descriptive paragraphs.)
DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPHS
A paragraph is generally 3-5 sentences long. Question's 3, 6, 8, 10 and/or 11, and 12, can be turned into a sentence or two that you can then combine to create your descriptive paragraph(s).
3. Who are my main characters?
4. Which character's POV do I use the most? (If you switch points of view. If you only have one character POV then your description should be in their POV.)
5. What are the main goals in my story?
6. Out of these goals which are the most important/exciting? (These will be the elements used in the description)
7. What stands in the way of my characters success?
8. Which of the above is their greatest challenge? (Include in paragraph)
9. What will happen if your protagonist fails? (Be emotionally specific)
10. Out of the above, which is the worst that could happen? (Use this as the end of your paragraph description)
OR
11. What elements in my story's climax are the most exciting? (Choose one of these or something from 10. to end your description, tying all the sentences you created using questions 3, 6, 8, 10/11, together.)
12. What is your Genre, book title, and word count? (example: Your final sentence can read....My 90,000 word YA Fantasy, BOOK TITLE, draws the reader into a world where... fill in however you want. End the paragraph(s) and move on.
INTRODUCING YOU
13(a). IF you have writing experience.
What are my greatest writing accomplishments, sales, publications, awards, etc.
13(b). If you have NO writing experience...yet.
What are some interesting points about me that make me sound qualified to write in the genre chosen? And/or... Who does my writing compare to and why? 14. What books have I read that they represent that may compare to my writing style?
15. What is my ...?
*Genre?
*Word Count?
*Book Title?
(Be careful with this paragraph and make sure to read your agents specific guidelines. Some agents don't want to hear anything other than your publishing credits and some get really annoyed when you compare yourself to other authors, especially if you are brazen enough to say you think you are the next Stephenie Meyer or J.K. Rowling. When in doubt skip this paragraph all together, and move onto the thank you paragraph.)
FINAL SENTENCE
16. THANK THEM FOR THEIR TIME! Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.
Follow with a "Sincerely", "Yours truly", or whatever floats your boat.
Now that you have your list, you can take all the elements from your breakdown and start writing. Remember to try and keep it down to a single page, and format it according to the guidelines of the agent/editor. There will usually be different formats for email and snail mail submissions.
If the agent/editor wants you to include chapter or synopsis with your query you can type at the bottom of your query...
(For snail mail) ENC: Synopsis and first three chapters as per your guidlines.
(For email) INC: Synopsis and first three chapters as per your guidelines.
Once you've typed your query don't jump the gun and send it right off. Wait a few days and go back and look it over with fresh eyes. Check for mistakes. Then loan it to your good pal who's great with grammar and have them look it over. Then if you can afford it, hire a freelance editor to look it over. Some aren't too bad in price and it just might be the difference between a sale or not. I'll have a link on my Aspiring Authors page to the freelance editor I use as soon as its available. She's fabulous and fair priced. I don't know where I'd be without her. My grammar is terrible! I also have a checklist for writing a synopsis--I really hate those. I'll try to get that one posted soon!
Good luck!!! May your next query bring you the success you desire!!
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